谁能告诉我这两段代码错在哪里？

onsubmit="text.value='姓名：'+yourname.value+'\r\n'+'昵称：'+yournickname.value+'\r\n'+'email:'+youremail.value+'\r\n'+'OICQ:'youroicq.value+'\r\n'+'ICQ:'+youricq.value+'\r\n'+'MSN:'yourmsn.value+'\r\n+'电话：'+yourtel.value+'\r\n'+'手机:'+yourmobile.value+'\r\n'+'地址：'+yourhouse.value+'留言：'+'\r\n'+message.value" onsubmit="text.value='姓名：'+yourname.value+'\r\n